capt_duck (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} capt_duck) wrote,@ 2005-02-15 16:16:00 |
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ummm...
I have decided that for today I want to review a Homestar Runner Sue... If I can find one
Well, this isn't a sue, but it is still really bad
TITLE: Grong A documentary
PERPETRATOR: Son-Of-The-Hunter
FULL NAME: Grong
SPECIES: Humanoid Lizard
HAIR: none mentioned
EYES: none mentioned
MARKINGS: none mentioned
POSESSIONS: A "laptop from his parents before he moved out" <-(this is in an author's note at the end of the first chapter), "a red shirt and blue jeans that were custom made just for his tail", a cardboard box, Marzipan
ORIGIN: He has/had parents. The are mentioned once in the aforementioned author's note
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: An online buddy of StrongSad and he collects and sells bottles to Bubs. StrongSad invites him to stay with at Chez Strong. StrongBad HATES him, and tries to kill him but...
SPECIAL ABILITIES: ... He kicks his butt with his awesome ninja moves...no, just no
NOTES:
Its really bad, and I get the feeling it was written by a ten year old.
SAMPLE: It was the middle of the night. Slowly, across Strongbads living room, a shadow crept around. At that same time Grong had gotten up to get a drink of water. The shadow entered Grong’s bedroom. The shadow stared at the dry erase calendar for the month of February. He looked at the thumbtack board that had assignments, pictures, and paychecks. The shadow looked at Grong’s laptop, which was flashing in standby. He then looked at the bed. The shadow took out a knife and began stabbing the bed like a ringwraith.
At that moment, Grong came back into the room and saw a shadow stabbing his bed. Instantly Grong turned on the light. He then saw Strongbad stabbing his futon with a knife.
Grong whipped around into a spinning jump kick. His legs wrapped around Strongbads neck and threw him to the ground. Strongbad fumbled to get his knife. He got back up swinging. Grong backfilpped into the wall, and pushed back as a lizardman torpedo and landed right in Strongbads gut. He dropped his knife and clutched his stomach in pain.
Grong picked it up and pocketed it. “I wouldn’t try that again any time soon.” He said. Strongbad fell on his face and became unconscious. A loud voice came out of nowhere: KO! Perfect! Grong looked around to find the voice, and then picked up Strongbad. He went into the basement and tossed him on the couch. Grong went back to his room and locked the door.
The next morning Strongbad was bruised all over. Grong didn’t say anything. Strongbad was mumbling something about Grong being a son of a bitch, but other than that breakfast. Just then Grong broke the silence. “I had an unsettling night last night. Apparently” he looked over at Strongbad “somebody doesn’t want me here. I can say that if these events don’t stop, I’ll do something much worse than bruise you.” With that, Grong left the room.
I have decided that for today I want to review a Homestar Runner Sue... If I can find one
Well, this isn't a sue, but it is still really bad
TITLE: Grong A documentary
PERPETRATOR: Son-Of-The-Hunter
FULL NAME: Grong
SPECIES: Humanoid Lizard
HAIR: none mentioned
EYES: none mentioned
MARKINGS: none mentioned
POSESSIONS: A "laptop from his parents before he moved out" <-(this is in an author's note at the end of the first chapter), "a red shirt and blue jeans that were custom made just for his tail", a cardboard box, Marzipan
ORIGIN: He has/had parents. The are mentioned once in the aforementioned author's note
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: An online buddy of StrongSad and he collects and sells bottles to Bubs. StrongSad invites him to stay with at Chez Strong. StrongBad HATES him, and tries to kill him but...
SPECIAL ABILITIES: ... He kicks his butt with his awesome ninja moves...no, just no
NOTES:
Its really bad, and I get the feeling it was written by a ten year old.
SAMPLE: It was the middle of the night. Slowly, across Strongbads living room, a shadow crept around. At that same time Grong had gotten up to get a drink of water. The shadow entered Grong’s bedroom. The shadow stared at the dry erase calendar for the month of February. He looked at the thumbtack board that had assignments, pictures, and paychecks. The shadow looked at Grong’s laptop, which was flashing in standby. He then looked at the bed. The shadow took out a knife and began stabbing the bed like a ringwraith.
At that moment, Grong came back into the room and saw a shadow stabbing his bed. Instantly Grong turned on the light. He then saw Strongbad stabbing his futon with a knife.
Grong whipped around into a spinning jump kick. His legs wrapped around Strongbads neck and threw him to the ground. Strongbad fumbled to get his knife. He got back up swinging. Grong backfilpped into the wall, and pushed back as a lizardman torpedo and landed right in Strongbads gut. He dropped his knife and clutched his stomach in pain.
Grong picked it up and pocketed it. “I wouldn’t try that again any time soon.” He said. Strongbad fell on his face and became unconscious. A loud voice came out of nowhere: KO! Perfect! Grong looked around to find the voice, and then picked up Strongbad. He went into the basement and tossed him on the couch. Grong went back to his room and locked the door.
The next morning Strongbad was bruised all over. Grong didn’t say anything. Strongbad was mumbling something about Grong being a son of a bitch, but other than that breakfast. Just then Grong broke the silence. “I had an unsettling night last night. Apparently” he looked over at Strongbad “somebody doesn’t want me here. I can say that if these events don’t stop, I’ll do something much worse than bruise you.” With that, Grong left the room.
